Chapter Length: Author Intent and Reader Response: #authortoolboxbloghop

How can chapter length serve the intent of the author, and affect mood, theme, and character?

Best-selling author James Patterson famously writes very short chapters, short enough to be read in a few minutes. Many readers like this. In part, it’s because a chapter or a few can be read between stops on the commuter train, or for ten minutes before bed, or on a coffee break. It also suits the genre: fast action, short chapters, focused on one event.

But I write historical fiction (of a sort), and this genre tends to longer chapters. The hero’s journey also underlies all my books, and again, this structure beloved of epic fantasy tends not to be expressed in short chapters. In my first trilogy, Empire’s Legacy, all three books have a chapter length around 5000 words. My new release, Empire’s Reckoning, has an average chapter length of just under 1700 words. Why the change?

I’ll start by saying it had nothing to do with Patterson’s reasons. The new book is still a hero’s journey, but it’s told in two timelines – the present and 14 years earlier, and with a structure that involves the protagonist recalling events from the past timeline. Memory is key to this story, and memories rarely occur in long unbroken segments. By breaking what the protagonist is remembering into shorter sections, it’s a better mirror of how memory works. (It also cues the reader that in each of these chapters, what the protagonist is recalling has its own value. In a long chapter, it would be easier for an important point to be lost in the flow.)

There’s a second reason, too. The narrator of Empire’s Reckoning is a scáeli, a position based on the skalds of Scandinavian society: storytellers, poets and musicians. By dividing the story into discrete sections, I was purposely mirroring the structure of a Scandinavian saga[i], because that is how Sorley, the narrator, would tell it.

That’s how I used chapter structure for my purposes. What about reader reaction?  Well, none of the reviews have complained, so far! More interestingly, three have used the world ‘saga’ in their write-ups. While I know this has a second meaning – a long family history – in literature, I can’t help wonder if the structure triggered this reference. Reader response is not always conscious.

I’ve just beta read another historical fiction book of almost the exact length of mine, and with the same number of chapters – and it’s written that way for almost the same reason. A two-timeline structure, involving a journey, and stories being told on that journey. There’s a classic story structure being mirrored here, too (I’ll give you a hint: the stories are told each night) and it worked extremely well, even though it’s unusual for the genre.

So, when you’re thinking about your chapter length, give some thought not just to Patterson’s reasons – they are completely valid, especially in today’s fast-paced world – but to how it reflects and serves the mood and message and even the characters of your story. I can’t imagine, for example, The Lord of The Rings being written in short chapters: it would go against the epic nature of the story. That The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy has a chapter of one paragraph also makes perfect sense (as much as anything does, in a Douglas Adams book) given the nature of that tale.

What examples come to mind for you of the chapter length strengthening – or weakening – the mood or theme of a novel?


[i] Or at least in translation. When I took the sagas in school, this is what the translations looked like. I realize their original structure may well have been different, and differently presented.

Author: marianlthorpe

Not content with two careers as a research scientist and an educator, Marian L Thorpe decided to go back to what she’d always wanted to do and be a writer. Author of the alternative world medieval trilogy Empire’s Legacy, Marian also has published short stories and poetry. Her life-long interest in Roman and post-Roman European history informs her novels, while her avocations of landscape archaeology and birding provide background to her settings. As well as writing and editing professionally, Marian oversees Arboretum Press, a small publishing imprint run as a collective. Marian is currently writing Empire's Reprise, the trilogy following Empire's Legacy.

9 thoughts on “Chapter Length: Author Intent and Reader Response: #authortoolboxbloghop”

  1. My two most recent books are multi-POV (thriller and a mystery), and for me the shorter chapters tend to work better. I end up being able to end on cliffhangers in one POV, switch to the other POV, and hopefully the reader is eager to get through that POV to be able to get back to what happened after the cliffhanger. Great thoughts!

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  2. Thanks for laying out the specific reasons you’ve chosen for different chapter lengths in different projects. I tend to like longer chapters myself (up to a point) because of how I can move and develop within a single chapter without breaking the flow. As you say, though, it’s got to be the right chapter lengths for the story it is. Thank you for sharing!

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  3. Good post, and something to keep in mind, as my chapters are all between 3000 and 4000 words with scene breaks and section breaks. I like each to stand on its own, with a beginning, middle and end, which works well if you used excerpts. (I once read a book with hundreds of two-page chapters!)

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    1. I use a lot of scene and section breaks in my long chapters, too, but for this book it just didn’t work. My developmental editor suggested the shorter chapters for a few chapters at the end, and when I really looked at it, it made sense for the whole book.

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  4. I’ve been thinking a lot lately about structure of my second book – and hadn’t considered chapter length, but now I am! Thank you so much. I love this AuthorsToolboxBlogHop because I always learn something I never thought I would.

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