Rarity from the Hollow is subtitled A Children’s Story. For Adults. The author, Robert Eggleton, writes with the accuracy of familiarity about the lives of children caught in a multi-generational cycle of abuse; of men scarred by war and poverty, of PTSD, of the coping mechanisms of wives and mothers trying to hold families together.

The opening scenes of this book are difficult to read and harrowing in their blunt depiction of the kinds of abuse that Lacy Dawn, the protagonist, and her friend Faith experience. As Lacy Dawn narrates the story, elements of fantasy begin to develop, fantasy that then changes to a coherent, but oddly detached story of extra-terrestrial (and human) intervention. The extra-terrestrial intervention addresses primarily the psychological and behavioural issues confronting Lacy Dawn’s family; the human intervention – of a type beyond (or above?) the law, in a renegade Gates Foundation way – provides employment and support.

The book could be read, I think, as pure fantasy, revealing Lacy Dawn’s imagined escape from the cruel realities of her life, or, as a satire on the hurdles faced by agencies or individuals attempting to intervene in the lives of families caught in the vicious cycle of abuse. Or, perhaps, a combination of the two. I lean toward the latter. In either case, it is not a particularly easy or enjoyable read, the reality of the described lives always in the back of the reader’s mind, emphasizing the unreality of the unfolding events. A strong element of sexuality, realistic but disturbing given the age of the protagonist, remains throughout the story. But it stands in good company: I can think of other disturbing satires that have been difficult to read, but carry a strong message: A Clockwork Orange, for one.

This is not a book for children, or even for teens, and it is not a book for those who are looking for escapist fantasy. Rarity from the Hollow pulls no punches: even though some passages are very funny, it is unlikely to be those the reader remembers. It’s also a book you’ll likely need to take breathing spaces from. But I remain glad I was offered it to review. I’m giving Rarity from the Hollow four stars.

All proceeds from the book have been donated to a child abuse prevention program.

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Social Agent Nancy Rose inhabits a dark and dangerous world, where she must navigate a complex, convoluted underworld where power resides in the few, lives are short and shadowed, and the lines between law enforcement and the underworld are blurred.

Several generations after a virus has destroyed all men, scientists have found a way to return men to the world, but there are those – the Queens of the Sicarii – who oppose this. Nancy Rose has her own complex relationships with men, and her own motives in the pursuit of her duties may be suspect. While Wire’s novel is science fiction, it owes much to classic crime noir.

Wire writes in a style that strongly evokes the dark mood and setting of this story. Characterization and character development reflect the noir genre, revealing just enough about the protagonist, her allies and her enemies to move the plot forward. The first book in an intended series, it could be argued that the world-building is a bit weak, but more is likely to be revealed in further stories. There were times I found myself slightly confused about the motivations of some characters, and I found the the pacing a bit uneven.  But overall, After the Queens of the Sicarii kept me intrigued and entertained. Wire’s world may be post-apocalyptic, and his protagonist is a young woman, but this is far from the various Hunger Games or Insurgent clones that are offered to me for review.  Four stars for this debut novel from a talented new author.

Bleeding Snow, the sequel to Creeping Shadow, is the second book in Caroline Peckham’s Rise of Isaac fantasy series for young adults. The story continues from where it left off. Oliver and his compatriots, including his grandfather Ely, have crossed into Glacio in an attempt to reach Brinatin and save May’s life by lifting the curse. They are rapidly captured and jailed for illegally using a Gateway. The ensuing consequences make up the bulk of the story in Bleeding Snow, along with the continuing back-story involving Oliver’s parents and Isaac.

I found this second book less compelling and more derivative than the first volume. The book continues the action and moves the story forward, although not very far in the terms of finding a cure for May. Faced with a huge obstacle standing between them and their goals, the group has to adapt and compromise. The plot, and the action resulting, take centre stage over character development, but there is enough growth (and romance) to continue to make the characters interesting. It’s always difficult to fairly judge the second book of a multi-book series: they are frequently bridges between the introduction of characters and their challenges and the climax of the action in a further book, and cannot be fully assessed as a stand-alone novel would be.

We do learn more about William, Alison and Isaac, and how this back-story intersects with the immediate action involving Oliver, May, and the others. I found this thread of Bleeding Snow and its development more satisfying than the main story, as it appears that, in the overall story arc, the developments here are of more consequence than the events that befall the protagonists in this book. But only time and the next book will confirm or contradict that supposition!

I did, however, have serious niggles with this book, falling into two categories: plot, and errors of grammar and spelling.

A large part of the book is taken up with a journey in the winter world of Glacio and the rescue of a kidnapped prince from the evil trolls that mine gems in the caves. Unfortunately, this read to me as being heavily influenced by a combination of the attempted journey over Caradhras and the Redhorn Pass in The Fellowship of the Ring, Thorin and Co.’s adventures in Smaug’s cave in The Hobbit, and the battles in Moria. The escape sequence that ends this adventure again appears to owe much to Indiana Jones and the Temple of Doom. This may not have been the author’s intent, nor even her influences, but that is how they came across to me.

As far as grammar and spelling, there were more errors than I like to see in the text, the most jarring being the mis-use of ‘effect’ or ‘effected’ when ‘affect’ or ‘affected’ is meant, and the mis-spelling of ‘mat’ as ‘matt’. The inclusion of the non-standard grammatical structure ‘was sat’, which is ubiquitous in the UK, should also, in my opinion, been caught by the editors. A few other minor errors occurred, but these were the ones that caught my eye. However, the author assures me these will be corrected.

Overall, then, I’m giving Bleeding Snow three-and-a-half stars at this point. That may change after the next book, when I can more fairly rate it as part of the overall series. Three-and-a-half stars means I like it, but found some significant flaws. I would still recommend the series to someone looking for an undemanding, entertaining young-adult fantasy story.
The author provided me with a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.

On January 5th I posted a review of Robin Wildt Hansen’s book The World, giving it 4 stars. Since then, the author has made structural and editorial changes to the book, and on yesterday’s flight from Heathrow to Toronto, I read it again.  I am pleased to say the changes have had a positive effect on the book, making it more accessible to readers and fixing issues to do with punctuation and paragraph structure.  I’m upgrading my review here and on all other sites to 5 stars:  Arkin’s mystical journey is now one of the best books I’ve read in the last year.  It will challenge you, but it should, read with an open mind and an appreciation of language, both entertain and possibly enlighten you.